Wednesday 1 July 2015

Darling...It's Raining Like Crazy


“Nothing makes a room feel emptier than wanting someone in it.”
― J

Darling lover,

It’s raining like crazy,
I am cold and feel ghastly;
To be lonely on such a day,
When all blues have turned grey.

Sitting by the patio;
I glance through shadow
Of the raindrops, playing at with me,
Beyond the marquee.

I gaze at my piano, it reflects the red,
Of the satins furrowed on the bed;
My desires turn sinful,
Abruptly; with an irresistible pull.

My thoughts racing towards you,
Coz, it’s you, I always look to.
It’s raining like crazy;
Let’s curl up being sluggish and lazy.




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13 comments:

  1. The rain inspired poetry is superb and the leaves look ravishing with the droplets on them.

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  2. amazing...hope he runs and comes back to enjoy the rain together...superbly written :)

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  3. lovely lines as usual Dipanwita :-) am missing the Mumbai rains.... and err... much more ;-)

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    1. Hahahaa...Yes Archana. Mumbai rains are a bliss. You can hate it and love in equally. :)

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  4. Wow Dipanwita .. Simply beautiful ..loved he spontaneity and the flow. Can't help noticing that the rain soaked leaves are not green but red - symbolising passion . :) Glad I visited :)

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    1. Thank you Kokila. You noticed it very well. That was exactly the motive of putting that picture up. :)

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  5. Wow Dipanwita .. Simply beautiful ..loved he spontaneity and the flow. Can't help noticing that the rain soaked leaves are not green but red - symbolising passion . :) Glad I visited :)

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  6. Beautiful lines...Poet in the making.. :)

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  7. Dipanwita! So beautiful! It's raining poetry!

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