“Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal.”
― Richard Puz
I am;
Turning into triviality,
With each grain of sand
Diminish beneath my feet.
Staring into tenebrosity,
Of the night, and
Wonder, how it never ceases to cheat.
If ever;
You see me digress,
Seduce me, with your smile so divine.
You feel my coldness,
And chills run down your spine.
Infatuate me, with your gentle caress,
Let our souls intertwine.
Come;
Hold me, with sensuous kiss, make me free,
Of all things I misunderstood
Love me, till the moment of adios.
Take my hand, take me away, walk with me,
Into the woods
Until my existence draws to close.
When in Life;
You decide to stop loving me,
Ask not for me to anyone, ‘coz
I, would vanish, bit by bit,
Into cessation
But, in all your memories, I would stay
For I, am your addiction.
Hence;
I beseech you, to,
Never break off from love
And I shall follow you,
To the greens and the blues;
Of the plains and the seas
Beyond eternities.
Beyond eternities.
Take my hand, walk with me; Take me away and make me free.
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**This poem has been published in Writer's Ezine June- 2015 issue and has been adjudged the Exceptional Poem for June 2015
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Share your thoughts with me at dipanwiita@gmail.com
love the poem, especially the last line... I say that to my husband so often :-)
ReplyDeleteCheers, Archana
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True that. Every girl wants the same from her significant half. :)
DeleteThank you dear :)
Alas !! Poems and realities r so different...wish to remain in the poetic world !!!
ReplyDeleteDitto. And I would love living 'em someday. Cheers! :)
Deleteyeah the last line says it all beautifully ..
ReplyDeleteI liked the tone of - " I would vanish bit by bit.." and its SO true .
Hope she gets everything she is asking for ... its not much , Its absolute :)
PS- its a 'she' .. isn't it :p
That sure is absolute. Thank you for dropping by Kokila. And yes, it's a "she". :)
DeleteThis is so heartening...love can bring so much happiness in our lives.
ReplyDeleteThat's true Alok. Glad you liked it. :)
DeleteVery heartening....love poems...
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
Deletenice one...!!!
ReplyDeleteRead something so deep so good after really ling time...!!!
Keep Scribbling :)
Cynosure
Thank you :)
Deletenicely written Dipanwita
ReplyDeleteThank you Ajay. :)
DeleteHi Dipanwita
ReplyDeleteWow wonderful peom, beautifully written (Y)
Thanks for sharing
Wishing you wonderful day ahead
Regards
Bhavikk shah
Thank you Bhavikk. Wish you a good day too. :)
Delete..i admire what you write..it is very much Nerudian..
ReplyDelete..the last few lines were just mind blowing..please keep writing.. :)
Many thanks Rigzin. :)
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