Thursday, 5 November 2015

Tranquility Surrounds

Enchanted;
Gazing at the waves,
And their many attempts
To brush against my feet.

I turn my face;
To the wind
Dipped in salt
And bittersweet.

I time travel;
To the decade that passed by
Gifting reminiscences
Of simmering coffee
Smiling cookies
Melting sun
And twilights.

Aha love!
Your gracious smile
And glinting eyes
Piercing through
The realm of my heart.

Enchanted;
I smile at the waves,
Endeavour triumphs
As they kiss my feet.

Bustling with laughter;
You and I.

One peck on my cheek;
Held in your arms,
I freeze and melt
In chorus
Tranquility surrounds.














Linking with Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Tranquility

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24 comments:

  1. Susan5 November 2015 at 19:08

    Ahh. I sit in those memories at the shore as well. It's a memory well and a tranquility well and a wishing well. In the sunlight and wind, there is never an urgency there.

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    1. Dipanwita Chakraborty6 November 2015 at 11:13

      True that Susan. With nature, you can just sit back and be yourself. Without any urgency of course. Thank you for dropping by. :)

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  2. Tomichan Matheikal5 November 2015 at 19:59

    One can almost feel the peck on the cheek. Good one.

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    1. Dipanwita Chakraborty6 November 2015 at 11:14

      :)

      I am glad you could feel that peck on the cheek. Thank you Sir.

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  3. Hannah5 November 2015 at 20:42

    Passionate! Love the waves... :)

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  4. Carol Campbell5 November 2015 at 21:27

    Yes, the waves really do kiss our feet. Very beautiful write!

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    1. Dipanwita Chakraborty6 November 2015 at 11:17

      Thank you for your visit Carol. I am glad you liked it. :)

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  5. Purba chakraborty5 November 2015 at 23:38

    This is so serene. You've painted such a gorgeous picture with your words :)

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  6. Sanaa Rizvi6 November 2015 at 00:01

    So soothing to the nerves.. perhaps one of the best poems I have read :D :D

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    1. Dipanwita Chakraborty6 November 2015 at 11:22

      What could one want anymore after reading such appreciating words. Thanks a lot for your visit dear.

      Do keep dropping by. :)

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  7. Mary6 November 2015 at 00:38

    I can really feel this poem! Nicely tranquil.

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  8. Victoria6 November 2015 at 09:50

    You help me recall the kiss of waves.

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    1. Dipanwita Chakraborty6 November 2015 at 11:24

      Glad you could relate to it Victoria. Thanks a ton. :)

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  9. Indrani6 November 2015 at 10:59

    Nice poem Dipanwita. You should write more.

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    1. Dipanwita Chakraborty6 November 2015 at 11:25

      Thank you Indrani. Well, I try to be as regular as I can. Will certainly work on your advise. :)

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  10. Maniparna7 November 2015 at 18:28

    Oh yes! dipped in memories, embraced by the soul of love...that's tranquillity...wonderfully penned, Dipanwita... :-)

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  11. Sherry Blue Sky8 November 2015 at 00:34

    This is a lovely expression of love and tranquility. Very wonderful to read.

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  12. Aritra9 November 2015 at 16:35

    Beautiful painting with words...loved each bit!!

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    1. Dipanwita Chakraborty9 November 2015 at 17:05

      Thanks a lot Aritra. Glad to see you here. Do keep stopping by. :)

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